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September 10, 2005

Although My Writing Sucks

I'm still brave enough to to post a poem I wrote:


As I read this morning in the
bed that held us, you lingered,
your autumn scent. A strand of
your hair, resplendent in the
dusty spotlight cast through
shade, traced the valley of
your absence across
a pillowcase.

Please, be kind, and keep your comments about this poem.

| By Joshua Daniels | 6:08 PM